Wanna read good vampire books? Look at these: Vampire Academy & Morganville Vampires.
Honestly, as a fellow writer, I wrote a better story at 11 than this. The characters were static and very annoying to read, the plot in all four books could be described in one short sentence, the writing was shoddy, and it didn't convey a good message (no, "I would become a vampire for the guy I just met" and "always date crazy-obsessive people" doesn't count.). How many times does Bella say Edward is attractive, someone says an asinine line, and how many times I wanted to chuck the book in the trash. I honestly could've made a drinking game out of the book: I hated the shoddy writing and lack of plot. Hate to break it to you, sweetie, I don't care what he is - no one is perfect. And, on top of all that, she described Edward as "perfect". I found that the only character I liked was Rosalie and that was because she hated Bella. She was spineless, depressed, and treated herself like a "little woman". I named my dog Bella just because I disliked her so much. No matter how hard I tried, I pictured some girl with red hair and obsessive personality disorder. He wasn't a man to me, I couldn't picture him as a man. manly? Not like some possessive, always depressed, stick-up-his-ass glittery fairy princess. I don't know about anyone else, but I like my male characters to act. I finished the whole series in a week (yes, I skipped a few chapters and the majority of New Moon & Breaking Dawn).
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